O: Mind if I critique this orrr ?

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*raila says:
you're Sere....produced as a prototype for retail but then thought to be too dangerous for society and the project was quickly scrapped}

well, im kinda upset about a recent critique i've gotten

and i know you are honest, and that can be a bad thing

and im not feeling good

but if this has to do with the white spots and such its because of the inking before it was scanned, and i promise everyone those will be gone once the tablet has been bought TT_TT

but i suppose you can (please be nice)

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Sora: Hey Riku, what's with the blindfold

It's not so much that, as I've seen those commonly used in anime work before.

My main thing is, you're using Photoshop, yeah? Use layers instead of using the wand tool to fill in colour, because it leaves weird, pixely jagged edges around the lines and seems to stick out more than the colour does. Next time, multiply your lineart layer in photoshop, delete the original locked layer. Put your new, duplicated layer on Multiply (( On your layer window, there's a drop down menu and it should be set to normal. Click it, and click Multiply ))

Multiply turns your lineart transparent, if you will, so you can colour under your lineart and it'll show up under your lines. (( You'll have to make a new layer and move it under your lineart layer before colouring it. :3 ))

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*raila says:
you're Sere....produced as a prototype for retail but then thought to be too dangerous for society and the project was quickly scrapped}

i dont have photoshop TT3TT (wishes lol)
i would, but the layers thing on the program i use isnt as good as Photoshop, i cant make it transparent or anything

but i get what ur saying ^^

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Sora: Hey Riku, what's with the blindfold

very cute I like the coloring!

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she's definetly in Rave's crew!
I like it!

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aw thank you so much!

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"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over the garbage can and says 'That's Punk?', and I say 'No that's trendy!'
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Sora: Hey Riku, what's with the blindfold

ROFL

aw sweet im glad u like it >w<

shes so cool! XD

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-Billie Joe Armstrong

Sora: Hey Riku, what's with the blindfold

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